On a cold winters night a ginormous a beast jumped up and put his cold bloody hands over his prey. he smelt like a dead skunk that has been there rooting for ten years. As he walked around You could here him grunting like a annoyed person. He was also deep breathing as loud as a rocket launch . when you saw him he had loads of oozing poesy spots all other his body. Loads of prickle's on his two heads.
Aloha Joshua,
ReplyDeleteAlright I'll be the first to say it, your beast sounds pretty nasty but I feel like that's what you were going for so ka pai! You have written a great little description of your beast, I don't think many smells could beat a decomposed skunk!
Perhaps next time you could include a rough sketch of your beast to complement your description, it sounds like he's quite a sight to behold! What colour would it be?
I love the movie Fantastic Beasts, have you seen it? One of my favourite creatures from the film was Newt's Bowtruckle, I just thought its tiny green twig like body, leafy head and little brown eyes were real adorable. Let me know if you have a favourite (if you've seen the film).
Keep up the great work Joshua.
Toe feiloa'i fo'i,
Cia.
Hi Cia thank you for your reply. My favourite character is the bowtruckle too. But I did not really like that movie, It was a bit boring compared to the over one. Fantastic beasts and where to find them I enjoyed that one because there were loads of mystery and action and it was funny.
ReplyDeleteHey Joshua,
DeleteYeah the Bowtruckle's awesome. I recently watched 'Fantastic Beasts: Crimes of Grindelwald' (the second movie), it was pretty intense. I'm looking forward to watching the next three movies!
I hope you are enjoying your holidays.
Toe feiloa'i fo'i,
Cia.